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Re: Haiku Train
I sit in silence. Isn't that immortality-- Being the present?
Jan 3, 2025 -
Re: A Word of Encouragement from Your Protagonist
Dear Writer, This is how the world ends, not with a whimper -- but a bang! Don't you remember the poem? Well, you put it into the story, credo di ...
Jan 3, 2025 -
Re: New Years Resolutions 2025
Why make a resolution When one could have a revolution? Modernity elicits valid suspicion In its taming traditions. ...er, that's why I don't make resolutions. ^_^
Jan 2, 2025 -
Re: The YWS Critique Sandwich
Oy, I'm impishly delighted by the S'More Method . Huzzah to it!
Jan 2, 2025 -
Re: Whats the first word you think of when I say... [7]
Fence
Jun 27, 2024 -
Re: What's in your character's bag?
Er, because this ought to be bumped, and I have a moment. Character #1 (no details, guess from his pockets/bag): Cigarette rolling paper, crumpled, stained; nano cards, one hopelessly bent; ...
Jun 27, 2024 -
Re: Favorite ice cream?
If mint weren't in earnest potato would earn it; but as mint's on the ballot, that's what we'll call it. And chocolate to boot? strike that, it's moot. Oh bother ...
Jun 8, 2024 -
Re: Help writing a sensitive scene
I'm a bit confused. Do you need suggestions for why she might move from mistrust, to trust? As in, what makes her change her mind about him? It might help ...
Jan 8, 2024 -
Re: Favorite Fictional Writing-Related Holiday
Oy, the Festival of Gratitude for Writing Utensils! Huzzah! Or the Fictional Day of Imp-lementing Anecdotal Impressions of Impecunious Relations in Dystopian Fiction.
Jan 8, 2024 -
Re: Tanka Train
Only one word says life: do not pass by so quickly. Sound is fugitive in this the graveyard of the seasons and missed, makes changing an ache.
Jul 6, 2023 -
Re: Tanka Train
No eyes given leave having followed the wild geese are safe boundaried: and they see more than what's been– ice, dead leaves of summer-speak
Jun 15, 2023 -
Re: Tanka Train
dusk at dawning smudged– nothing breaks to stake the day is coming, but still will some gaze, looking for warmth where sky has rubbed out the sun
Jun 12, 2023 -
Re: Connotations
Erasure, a collapsed face, looking down your own throat Delight
Jun 12, 2023 -
Re: Connotations
Clere storey, eaves, pre-dawn, between-breaths Faith
May 20, 2023 -
Re: Connotations
Willow, rivers, dawnlight. Extraction
May 19, 2023
